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Re: The Legend of Zelda: Shadow Alliance [Chapter 4 up]
« Reply #15 on: February 08, 2008, 04:12:11 PM »

Great work. You're story is really coming along well. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
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Re: The Legend of Zelda: Shadow Alliance [Chapter 4 up]
« Reply #16 on: February 09, 2008, 09:36:37 AM »

Here's chapter 5, sorry for the delay. Tongue
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Chapter 5

Midna had never seen Link run so fast. Even at her fastest flying speed she struggled to keep up. Ahead of her Link was moving at such a high speed, his legs were screaming agony at him. His shock grew as he entered Faron Woods. The destruction had spread here, the grass looked like hay, the rock faces were half demolished. He approached the spring to see Faron lying on his side, breathing heavily. “I couldn’t stop her” he panted.

Midna caught up to Link who was checking Faron’s injuries. “What happened here?” he asked, as a panting Midna sat down on a near by rock.

“She attacked me with powerful dark magic, she killed Ordon, I couldn’t see her, but I could hear her” he said as he breathed his last breath and slowly faded away into nothingness. Link couldn’t believe that anything could’ve killed the spirits. He dashed off again towards Ordon, Midna flying after him.

Link dashed through the path into Ordon. His house was on fire. He charged down the path to the main village. Midna following behind. The rest of the village burned, people lay on the ground. It looked just like the fields. Tears welled up in Link’s eyes. They were all dead. Colin lay on the ground, a sword by his side, Link’s Ordon Sword. He was still alive, but barely. “He, he, he” a voice laughed. Link spun round to see Ilia step out the shadows. “Due to my kindness, that little brat still lives” she cackled.

“Ilia? You did this? How could you?” yelled Link. He picked up Colin’s sword. He held Midna’s sword by his side and pointed Colin’s at Ilia. “Never would’ve I’d expected you to do this!” he spat.

“That’s not Ilia” coughed Colin.

“What?” asked Link, turning his head to Colin.

“It’s some witch, she’s possessed Ilia, and tricked you into leaving us” he coughed. Midna flew up to him, and took out a red potion.  “I suppose that you’re Midna?” he asked, as he took the potion. Midna nodded. “A friend of Link’s is a friend of mine”

“Did you really think this girl could kill everyone, they would’ve overpowered her in seconds” laughed Ilia. She fell over and a dark cloud floated up from her. the cloud formed into a twili woman wearing dark robes and a witch hat. She dropped down in front of Ilia.

“Veran! The ancient twili traitor! It’s because of your actions we were banished into the Twilight Realm” yelled Midna, baring her fangs.

“Do you really think I care? I did this to get revenge against Link” replied Veran.

“I don’t even know you!” yelled Link, pointing both swords at her.

“But, your ancestor did, he killed me and now you’ve paid for that little bastard who killed me” she laughed through an energy ball at Link, throwing him back.

“Uh, you’re so dead!” spat Link, charging at her swinging both swords. Veran jumped over his head and kicked him in the back. Link was sent flying into Fado’s burning house.

“Link!” yelled Midna, while Colin stared in horror. Midna spun round, and glared a soul stabbing glare at Veran. “I’ll kill you, you bitch!” she hissed. She threw an energy ball at Veran. The witch was only forced back by a few inches. She shook her head and laughed.

“Tut, tut,” she laughed “not really good of a princess to have such a temper”. She charged at Midna, who was barely able to dodge. Veran crashed to the ground. “You little sneak!” she roared. Veran’s form began to bubble and grow.

“What the hell?” grunted Colin, who was now on his feet. Both he and Midna stared disgusted at what was happening to Veran. She was now a dark shadowy blob, about four times her normal size. The blob began to grow legs, Veran’s head popped out of the blob. She hissed, spraying venom at the two. Her head span round and stopped looking like a spider head. “Crap” he said.

Midna giggled, Colin looked at her in confusion. “Was that to make you look more beautiful, because it looks like you failed that test” she laughed. She formed another energy ball. “Seen one giant spider, seen them all” she taunted. Veran spat silk at her, sticking her to the ground, the energy ball went flying into the lake. Another silk ball slammed Colin to the ground.

“Time to dine one princess” cackled Veran, scuttling over to Midna and baring her fangs.

“You’re a sick and twisted woman,” spat Midna. Veran put her head towards Midna, move wide open. Suddenly she exploded, and bits of her went flying off in all directions. “Huh?” questioned Midna, she forced her head off the ground, a spiky ball, attached to a chain sat there. At the end of chain was Link, who proceeded to cut Midna and Colin free.

“I’d glad you two are ok” he said hugging Midna to his chest. Colin stood up and walked over to Ilia who had woken up and was staring at the destruction.

“What have I done? They’re all dead, and it’s my fault!” she cried. Link let go of Midna, the two of them walked over to her.

“It’s not your fault” replied Link has he help her to her feet. He pulled out his bow and arrows and passed them to her. “You and Colin have to come with us, it’s too dangerous for us here” he said. Ilia put the quiver over her back and nodded. “Are there any survivors?” he asked.

“No, I remember that witch making me kill everyone except Colin” sighed Ilia looking at the ground to shame.

“It’s not your fault” argued Colin, has he picked up the Ordon Sword up and sheathed it.

“No one could’ve resisted her magic,” comforted Midna “she is a powerful witch, but at least she’s gone now”.

“Don’t think you’ve won yet” hissed Veran’s voice, as the blobs pulled together and reformed her human form. She was bleeding and covered in brushes. No condition to fight. “You got lucky this time, but next time you’re as good as dead!”. She disappeared into black twili squares.

Link and Midna explained to the two the story of the Dark Doomsday. And how Hyrule Field and Castle Town looked the same. “No flames were coming from Kakariko, maybe they and the Goron’s are alright, we should go see them” announced Link. He walked towards the village gates, the others followed. “We’re going to need an army to stand a chance against this threat” he continued.

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The four walked towards Kakariko Gorge. A group of moblins lay half dead on the ground. “What happened here?” Midna asked one of them.

“Boss refused to work for evil man, say whole tribe suffered after last work with evil” it replied. It struggled to get to it’s feet, but failed. “Guess we suffer anyway, evil man take tribe, conquer village and mountain, they slaves now” in grunted as it died.

“He wasn’t so evil after all” sighed Link, as Midna floated into the air again. “Look’s like they need our help” he continued as the four continued towards the village.
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Re: The Legend of Zelda: Shadow Alliance [Chapter 5 up]
« Reply #17 on: February 09, 2008, 11:20:39 AM »

Glad to see you finally updated. It was well worth the wait.
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Re: The Legend of Zelda: Shadow Alliance [Chapter 5 up]
« Reply #18 on: February 14, 2008, 05:20:24 AM »

Here's the next installment
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Chapter 6

As the group entered Kakariko, they were surprised at what awaited them. Hylians, gorons and moblins were chained to the ground mining the earth for materials. Up the road, carts filled with valuable gems was leaving the village, the end of the road patrolled by Darknuts. Eldin was changed to the ground, some sort of spell channeling his energy out into a small orb which floated above him. By the sanctuary was King Bulbin and Gor Goron. “We’ve got to free them, but without getting caught” announced Midna.

“Those knights look like they’ll be hard to get past” stated Colin. One of the hylians started to fall asleep, a Darknut slapped the man with the handle of it’s sword. He went back to mining. “Those things are pure evil” whispered Colin.

“We’ll have to tackle them head on” replied Link, as he silently drew his sword. The others hum hummed agreement. Link charged towards the Darknut who hit the Hylian, striking him with a mortal draw. It dropped down the ground dead. The other Darknuts approached him, as the rest of the group charged out of hiding. “Get them!” yelled Link. The group charged forwards, the Darknuts swung there swords at them, only landing a couple of hits. Ilia shot an arrow which struck a Darknut in the eye, which then ran around in a comical fashion. Soon enough the Darknuts were without armor.

“Let’s finish this” yelled Midna as an energy field spread out highlighting the Darknuts and Link. She swung her arms down, and Link flew through all of the Darknuts, exterminating them. Midna, Link and Colin used their swords and magic to cut everyone free from the chains, unfortunately Eldin had already died and the orb had disappeared The group told them about what was happening. Everyone agreed they would have to work together on this matter.

 “What do now?” asked King Bulbin.

“We find the Zoras and get them to join us,” replied Link “but we should collect some weapons”. A hour later everyone had some sort of weapon. Swords, bows, clubs and some using the Darknut katanas. They marched out into Hyrule Field, ready to crush all opposition.

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Meanwhile, at Lake Hylia was a gathering of twili, forced to flee their kingdom which had now become the headquarters of the gathering  escapees of the void. Hylians and Zoras had fled at their arrival from the desert. Lanurya watched from his spring, saddened by their suffering.

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In the twili palace throne room, two witches plotted. “Ee, ee, ee, ee,” laughed Komune, “soon the flames will be alight again and Lord Ganondorf will be fully restored”. Ganondorf floated over an altar, in suspended animation, protected by a force field.

“Being that he only died a short time ago compared to the centuries ago everyone else died, he can’t been fully restored yet, but soon the ceremony will be complete” laughed Kotake.

“That pesky sword always manages to keep a seal on his power for so many years” shrieked Komune.

“But this time, Zelda will be sacrificed instead of us, so Ganondorf will be able to control himself” laughed Kotake.

Veran walked into the throne room and bowed. “You’ve failed us, but then again we aren’t surprised” hissed Komune. She walked over to Veran and grabbed her neck. “We could just snap you like a twig…”. Veran winced awaiting her punishment. “… instead we’ll demote you to guard duty, now get out of our sight” she yelled throwing Veran out the room. Komune returned to her sisters side, who was know watching a glass ball showing the jewel carts riding the deserts.

“Yes that should be enough money, to satisfy our agreements with the others” grunted Kotake. She waked over to a window and looked at the courtyard, Veran walked out, dressed in a guard uniform, her head bowed in shame, Kotake couldn’t help but laugh. Komune joined in. The castle walls echoed with their bizarre laughter.

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In Zora’s Domain, the Zoras were gathering together discussing the disturbance at the lake. They looked up in surprise to see Link’s army gathered at the path to the Hyrule Field entrance. “I need to see Prince Ralis” announced Link stepping forward. The Zoras cautiously took like up the path to the throne room.

“What is the meaning of bringing such a huge gathering here?” asked Ralis, a little bewildered at Link’s unexpected nature. Link explained the details of the Dark Doomsday to him. “I see, this would explain what was happening” replied Ralis. He told Link of what was happening at the lake.

“If the twili are at the lake, then that would mean that Zelda is in the Twilight Realm” replied Link, as he and Ralis walked down the pathway. “We’ll be needing their, they know the place better than any of us” continued Link.

“Aren’t they evil though?” argued Ralis.

Link responded by telling him of Zant and Ganon’s influence on their minds. “I guess I understand, but will they work with us, after what our ancestors did?” asked Ralis.

“We’ll have to convince them otherwise” replied Link.

“You’re a real pain! Taking my slaves, killing my minions” yelled a figure cloaked in a green robe, which was walking up to Link. “The name’s Aganim” he continued.

“Bastard, you pay, hurt tribe, insult tribe” growled Bulbin. Aganim laughed and shot him with an energy ball throwing him into the crowd.

“It’s Link I want, his ancestor killed me, and this is the closet I’ll get to my revenge” he retorted.

“Once again, I’m paying the price for an ancient hero’s meddling” sighed Link as he drew his sword, ready for comabt.
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Re: The Legend of Zelda: Shadow Alliance [Chapter 5 up]
« Reply #19 on: February 14, 2008, 05:39:56 AM »

Your doing a really good job with this fic, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Re: The Legend of Zelda: Shadow Alliance [Chapter 5 up]
« Reply #20 on: February 14, 2008, 02:32:37 PM »

Great job. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
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