Nooo... Why am I always the one to add criticism to your drawings?... Can't someone with a bit more artistic knowledge do it instead?
You really need to work on those thumbs, Aldon... In the last few pictures they seem to be tiny stubs, completely unsuitable for grasping objects. Hands usually are quite hard to draw... Though, the good thing about drawing them is that you'll likely always have a reference at hand (lol, puns). Next time you drawing a hand, try putting your own hand in the pose you're drawing to get an idea of the shape it needs to be.
Anyways... Not a bad picture. Nice design, nice colours, nice boobs... Pretty good,overall.
You really need to work on those thumbs, Aldon... In the last few pictures they seem to be tiny stubs, completely unsuitable for grasping objects. Hands usually are quite hard to draw... Though, the good thing about drawing them is that you'll likely always have a reference at hand (lol, puns). Next time you drawing a hand, try putting your own hand in the pose you're drawing to get an idea of the shape it needs to be.
Yeeahh.. I see what you're talking about.but her thumbs were chopped off in the war. My hands are small, and are probably not the best reference around Maybe for drawing kids or something. But I'll definitely extend the thumbs out next time. As for the people with higher artistic knowledge.. They left the forum. Gosh, those guys were awesome... They crit my work so hard.
The hair going over her chest is improperly shaded. With the angle of the light you have, the hair should cast a short shadow to the left of her chest and neck.
Didn't catch that, Thanks. I'll keep that in mind next time.
[from her point of view] The left should should be lower than the right, I think. I tried making her pose, and it's how I naturally sloped my shoulders. The shoulder should be higher on the way she's leaning. When you do it the opposite way it makes someone seem like their cowering in fear (at least it's what it looked like I was doing in real life). Raising her hand contributes as well, since a raised arm usually has a higher shoulder than one at rest.
This is hard for me to tell.. I was trying to make a more cutesy pose, kind of that "Shy" look goin' on. However, what I notice after you pointing that out is the higher shoulder is actually a bit bigger than the other, so perhaps It's just because I added too much to the shoulder on that side. I think that they're actually suppose to be level for the most part. She's kind of leaning forward with that being said, so.. Yeah, I'm not too sure about this pose.
Don't worry about sounding like a Jerk. Again, I enjoy criticism as they give me goals to work towards in my next drawings.
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Maybe for drawing kids or something. But I'll definitely extend the thumbs out next time. As for the people with higher artistic knowledge.. They left the forum. Gosh, those guys were awesome... They crit my work so hard.
